I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
For reading we have been writing info report's about the Pyramids of Giza and Extreme weather. This is my extreme weather presentation. If you have any feed back please comment.
Hi Sam I'm Mark From South Hornby,I like how you put Good Informations for Extreme Weather and This reminds me of The Flood that happened in Philippines and it has no electricity for 3 months and It has a heavy rain and heavy wind. But maybe you could make the slides a bit colorful But I like it.
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Hi Sam I'm Mark From South Hornby,I like how you put Good Informations for Extreme Weather and This reminds me of The Flood that happened in Philippines and it has no electricity for 3 months and It has a heavy rain and heavy wind. But maybe you could make the slides a bit colorful But I like it.
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