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Thursday, 18 October 2018

Would you rather

Would you rather

For writing this week we have been learning to write would you rather stories. Here is the one I had written.

Would you rather be able to fly or be able to turn invisible
I think I would rather be able to fly because I would be able to get great views and won't have to pay to go to other countries”.
And turning invisible I wouldn’t be able to have any friends and my family won’t be able to see me.
If you know any way you can help me please comment.
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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous12:22 pm, October 18, 2018

    Hi Sam nice would you rather but if you turned invisible you would be able to turn back so your friends and family could see you. Next Time maybe add some supporting details so you have more reasons. Hopefully you found this helpful But Great Work!

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