Fire works poem
WALT: To make a poem to do with fire works
For reading we had to make a poem about fireworks
Flow like a show
Lose like you’ve been beanboozled
Rock like a shock
East as a easy chicken
Worst than a water gun
OK let the dogs out ruf ruf ruf ruf
Rosier than rose gold
Kinder than a bomb going off
Sugar is worse than salt
Hi there Samuel
ReplyDeleteMy name is Jade F and I will be working with your school cluster in the Summer Learning Journey Programme this summer break.
Fantastic job on your fireworks poem, I really like your sentences and how relatable they are in real life during occasions such as Guy Fawkes or New Years; all the pets are kept inside barking away because they’re afraid of the loud bangs, too true! I also liked your line about the firework color “rosier than rose gold”,I thought that described fireworks perfectly! Which line in your poem are proud of most?
I hope you come in and join the blogging programme this summer. There’s heaps of fun activities to do and many things to blog about, I reckon you’d love it. All you have to do is head onto the activities page and begin the activities. If you would like to have a look at your mates blog posts or other student’s blogs who are in the Summer Learning Journey with you check out the programme’s twitter feed here. Copy the link below into your URL bar
https://sites.google.com/a/manaiakalani.org/connected-learners-share/sljtwitterfeeds
You can start in any order you’d like with the activities and once you have completed a task, post it onto your blog! The more activities you do, the more points you earn towards winning prizes at the end of programme!
Use the link below to get started and I hope to see your blog posts this summer!
https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities
Jade F :)